Craft Inc.
The Hidden History of the Creative Writing Workshop
Christopher Kempf | February 2023
Christopher Kempf
I’d been a house painter before I became a poet.
When I entered the MFA program at Cornell, therefore, I understood with some clarity, I thought, what my work there would entail. The planing and polishing of line, the shaping of poetic structure, the tinting of tone—this was work I’d been doing for years, albeit in a different medium, and I came to relish the image of myself, no doubt hubristically, as a worker in the gouache and gesso of language.
“Craft” we called that work, a metaphor, of course, which carries over the experience of manual labor into the mystical and elusive procedures of art.
As a working-class student from the rural Midwest, I felt out of place in many ways at Cornell, where my peers had matriculated from other Ivy League schools and where students and faculty alike wielded terms like “Westchester County” and “key bump” and “i-banker” with a fluency that eluded me. But work made sense to me, as sometimes little else did at Cornell. Work I had always understood. Work I could work with.
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As recent scholars of creative writing have recognized, the craft pedagogies I encountered at Cornell were hardly unique, nor were they original to the post-2000 explosion in creative writing MFA, PhD, and low-residency programs.
Figurations of writing as work have been integral to the discipline of creative writing since its inception. Tracing the institutional presence of writing craft to the founding of the Iowa Writers’ Workshop in 1936, Mark McGurl argues in The Program Era that instruction in craft techniques—among them structure, texture, tone, tension, and line—constituted part of a broader effort to promote modernist “impersonality” over and against the kinds of self-expression associated with Romanticism. Iowa graduate Flannery O’Connor, most famously, with her fiction’s efficient narrative structure and disciplined prose, embodies what McGurl calls a “masochistic aesthetics of institutionalization,” an aesthetic in which writing craft holds the whip, as it were, to the erstwhile expressive artist.
Alert to the potential shortcomings of such an anti-expressive pedagogy, and spurred on by broader social and cultural transformations, teachers and students of creative writing have begun to reconsider its implications for more socially oriented or identity-based writing. If craft discourses rely in part on the mediation of individual expression—always shaped by, channeled through, and articulated via disciplinary techniques—such discourses necessarily abstract from and homogenize embodied experience. “Race, gender, sexuality, etc. affect our lives and so must affect our fiction,” Matthew Salesses urges in Craft in the Real World, admonishing writers to “take craft out of some imaginary vacuum… and return it to its cultural and historical context.” McGurl reasons similarly. “First person may have been suspect [for its] lack of impersonality,” he writes, “but the appeal of speaking for oneself, or of having one’s voice heard, is obvious when it is considered as … political self-representation.” More generally, writers like Barrett Watten, Joshua Clover, and Juliana Spahr have criticized the separation of craft pedagogies from overarching critical, social, and theoretical conversations. “[C]raft is not what’s at stake,” Clover and Spahr write in their polemic “The 95cent Skool.” “So, no endless condensing. No polishing bannisters. No lapidary work at all.” And panels from the 2021 conference of the Association of Writers and Writing Programs extend these lines of thinking, dedicated as such panels were to subjects like “Beyond Prescriptivism: Finding Our Own Paths to Creativity” and “Making the Grade: How to Reduce Inherent Bias in Evaluating Creative Writing.” As these arguments recognize, craft-based pedagogies have contributed at times to a uniform and overly conventional poetry culture, one comprised of what David Dooley calls “workshop lyrics” and what Donald Hall satirizes as the “McPoem … of Hamburger University.”
In addition, however, to delimiting the expression of student-writers and homogenizing much of American poetry, craft-based pedagogies have worked quite materially to consolidate the authority of elite educational institutions. For the establishment across the 20th century of what Peter Drucker has termed a corporatized “knowledge economy” depended to a large degree on the expropriation of technical knowledge formerly the province of craft laborers. As new forms of abstract, administrative, or professional-managerial labor emerged alongside complex economic enterprises, craft ways of making and knowing were stripped away, a process facilitated by the creative writing workshop. Transcoding professional-managerial soft skills—linguistic facility, social and emotional discernment, symbolic fluency—in the language of work, craft pedagogies dismantle and reconstruct craftsmanship in a lexicon falsely nostalgic for practices the university itself has helped to render obsolete. The workshop poem or short story, this is to say, shares rhetorical space with the craft IPA or artisanal NFT or hand-loomed Pottery Barn rug—in this space, one economic practice rewrites itself in the language of another, just as right-wing corporatism continuously rewrites itself in the language of populism.
Alert to the potential shortcomings of such an anti-expressive pedagogy, and spurred on by broader social and cultural transformations, teachers and students of creative writing have begun to reconsider its implications….
To understand these procedures—how the university mobilizes craft as part of what Christopher Findeisen calls its “symbolic class warfare”—we might ask what it means to conceive of the writing classroom as a “workshop” in the first place, with all that that term entails. Despite growing scholarly interest in creative writing, the discipline’s central practice and sole institutional form has remained invisible before our eyes. Why has this been the case? Where is the work on workshop? For there is nothing inherent in creative writing that precludes students from practicing it in a “salon” or “studio” or “seminar.” There is nothing in the discipline that necessitates craft-based pedagogies over approaches based on affective response or literary history or even poetic theory. With the rise of the workshop in American culture, however, manual and mental labor have been welded together like steel plates. What fissures does that weld seal shut? What is at stake in the figuration of literary production as craft labor?
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The first use of “workshop” to describe a course in creative writing occurred at Harvard University in 1912, when drama professor George Pierce Baker established an institution for the writing and production of plays which he named, advisedly, the 47 Workshop. “That is what it seems to me we could call our experiment,” Baker wrote to one student. “‘Experimental Theatre’ seems to me too grand.”
No avant-garde insurrection, Baker’s pedagogy was serious labor in stagecraft, part of an American Arts and Crafts movement with which Baker was closely affiliated. Specifically, Baker adapted a “craft ideal” which maintained that the worker’s expressive labor should at the same time adhere fastidiously to technical standards like those enforced by preindustrial guilds. For Baker, the self-expression of the playwright would be tempered by the collective labor of the workshop itself, with work committees regulating everything from make-up and set design to prompting, acting, and ushering. Workshop productions were further subjected to intensive technical critique from their audiences, the members of which were selected only after rigorous screening. “I am trying to move heaven and earth to get two tickets to the 47 Workshop play for this week,” a Mrs. Walter B. Kahn wrote Baker in 1921, “and I have been told that to achieve this stupendous result you are the only person to turn to.” With regrets, Baker declined. Though organized around an anti-expressive ideology, the 47 Workshop, like many other Arts and Crafts initiatives, levied a profound critique of established economic and educational regimes, disrupting a utilitarian curriculum geared in large part toward churning out professional-managerial workers. At the same time, the Workshop served as a proving ground for well-crafted dramatic productions that might supplant the commercial fare of Broadway, then characterized by hackneyed narratives and sentimental melodrama. In unpublished lecture notes, Baker repeatedly stresses that “the play’s the thing,” succinctly articulating his view of drama as a constructive process—as “stagecraft” in every sense of that word.
While McGurl, Salesses, and others trace craft pedagogies to the Iowa Writers’ Workshop, then, the tempering of expression through craft in fact dates to a genre since expelled from standard creative writing curricula, the drama, as well as to an American Arts and Crafts movement whose influence on higher education has been underappreciated. Indeed, contemporary creative writing craft—discussion of syntactical “texture,” for instance—might be considered an abstraction of material practices first institutionalized in the Arts and Crafts movement, as might the structure of the writing workshop itself. As craft sociologist Richard Sennett explains, “In a workshop, the skills of the master can earn him or her the right to command, and learning from and absorbing those skills can dignify the apprentice or journeyman’s obedience.” The master of the writing workshop, of course, is the published author who serves as instructor, a figure whose charismatic presence, not to mention cultural cachet and professional connections, can “dignify” by association the work of his or her students. And the way student-writers demonstrate their expertise is the MFA thesis, akin to the masterpiece by which craft apprentices attained journeyman status. Even such a notorious shibboleth as “show don’t tell” originates in the protoindustrial workshop, as the master’s visual demonstration provides a model for the apprentice’s work.
Despite Baker’s practice of dramatic craft within a workshop setting, however, and despite the proliferation of craft-based workshops after him, the historical institution from which the 47 Workshop drew its name rarely witnessed the kind of labor that Baker promoted. Mistakenly associated with earlier forms of guild craftsmanship, the protoindustrial workshop of the 18th and 19th centuries marked a transition between hand craftsmanship and the alienated work of the factory; in many cases workshop labor was characterized by machine production, thorough subdivision of labor, and employee management practices strikingly reminiscent of later economic eras. A mixed metaphor at the very heart of creative writing, the association of workshops with craft labor seems particularly misleading given the role of higher education in suppressing earlier, more holistic work practices. As labor historian Michael Denning explains, “Not only did the Taylorism of modernity accentuate the division between … mental and manual labor, but it created entire industries and classes built on ‘mental labor’ and the appropriation of the skills of the craftworker.” The creative writing workshop may be the clearest example of this appropriation; it is no accident, after all, that the discipline of creative writing exploded at precisely the moment the university consolidated its influence over the American economy—such workshops served efficiently in their dual function of promoting professional-managerial values while transcoding those values in craft lexicons.
The workshop poem or short story, this is to say, shares rhetorical space with the craft IPA or artisanal NFT or hand-loomed Pottery Barn rug—in this space, one economic practice rewrites itself in the language of another…
That an American institution has figured prominently in the legitimation of social difference would hardly be remarkable, of course, were it not for the positioning of creative writing as somehow antithetical to an otherwise professional-managerial curriculum, as socially neutral, good old-fashioned work. A crucial vehicle for this rhetoric has been the creative writing “craft book,” that text which, ubiquitous in graduate and undergraduate workshops, guides students toward authorship by providing instruction in and examples of distinct craft techniques; many of the most influential craft books of the MFA era invoke manual labor as an analog for literary composition, from Mary Oliver’s comparison of the poet to a “bricklayer or any worker—even a brain surgeon” to John Hollander’s punning observation that “in couplets, one line often makes a point / Which hinges on its bending, like a joint.” More than ancillary metaphors, such figurations embody core principles within postwar and contemporary writers’ otherwise unique poetic ideologies. One of the more telling figurations of this line of thought comes from Roy Peter Clark’s 2006 craft book Writing Tools, in which Clark outlines “the disastrous consequences of bad writing in America—for businesses, professions, educators, consumers and citizens.”
Poorly written reports, memos, announcements, and messages cost us time and money. … The Commission calls for a ‘revolution’ in the way Americans think about writing. The time is right. … We need lots of writing tools to build a nation of writers. Here are fifty of them, one for every week of the year. You get two weeks for vacation.
What makes texts like Clark’s such powerful instruments in the crafting of class relations is not only that they justify social difference as professional technique, but that they disguise the operation of economic capital as cultural distinction. As Pierre Bourdieu notes of mass-produced couture craft—YETI coolers and Pendleton blankets might be conspicuous examples—“nothing is more distinctive, more distinguished, than the capacity to confer aesthetic status on objects that are banal or even ‘common.’” While instructors of creative writing will reminiscence fondly about their most talented students, these instructors will also tell you that there is hardly anything more “banal or even ‘common’” than the majority of student writing. Yet these same instructors, myself not excepted, continuously idealize that writing as craftsmanship—not paper-filing toward a fungible credential, but rigorous construction in language.
As writers and other artists continue to rethink workshop pedagogies, they might bear in mind the slippage in that metaphor, as well as its implications for the wider institutional practice of literary production. Creative writing may indeed prove more culturally distinctive than Systems Engineering or Supply Chain Management, but the vast majority of student writers, at the graduate no less than the undergraduate level, both descend from and ultimately find work as professional-managerial laborers—craft pedagogies do not produce poets so much as they produce professionals.
Like many other erstwhile challenges to American capitalism, in other words, writing craft was absorbed and re-articulated in academic-cum-corporate form. “Craft, Inc.,” we might call this form. And the industry is booming.
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The workshop was only one manifestation, however, of a widespread fascination with craft rhetoric in the postwar era, with public intellectuals frequently invoking craft as a metaphor for their own knowledge work.
In his 1959 The Sociological Imagination, C. Wright Mills advises sociologists to “let theory and method again become part of the practice of a craft.” Balancing expressive labor with scientific technique, Mills’s sociologist embodies an American Arts and Crafts craft ideal and carries it forward into an unexpected context. “The most admirable thinkers within the scholarly community … do not split their work from their lives,” Mills insists. “They seem to take both too seriously to allow such dissociation.” Admirable in its invocation of preindustrial work as an antidote to modernity, Mills’s white-collar craftsmanship at the same time ensures that mental laborers internalize the professional-managerial ethos of the university. While the protoindustrial workshop did serve, in some cases, as the home of the miller or textile-maker or blacksmith, the obscuring of boundaries between work and leisure also means that mental laborers, like most university employees, never punch out, that they are susceptible at any moment to the midnight phone call or emergency email. This infiltration of work into every aspect of existence looks far less insidious when it goes by the name of “craftsmanship.”
In this way, Mills’s sociologist figures forth what William H. Whyte three years earlier had called “the organization man,” that figure whose internalization of corporate values—especially a guild-like sense of corporate belonging—was “like nothing so much as the Middle Ages.” As Whyte explains, the challenge for organizations is “to re-create the belongingness of the Middle Ages.”
What with the Enlightenment, the Industrial Revolution, and other calamities, the job is immensely more difficult than it was in those simpler days. But with new scientific techniques, we can solve the problem. What we must do is to learn consciously to achieve what once came naturally. We must form an elite of skilled leaders who will guide men back, benevolently, to group belongingness.
Whyte’s striking deployment of craft rhetoric reveals how an evolving knowledge economy not only abstracted craft epistemologies but forced them back upon American workers as new-age corporate communalism. And it is a short step from Mills’s sociologist to the practice of “managerial craftsmanship” promoted by analyst Eugene Bardach in a 1998 Brookings Institution report. “The leader manipulates her followers as a craftsman would manipulate her materials,” Bardach explains. “To put it another way, craftsman and materials are roles in a system of strategic interactions, not personal attributes, talents, or conditions of individuals.” Though it would be difficult to find more succinct testimony to the expropriation of craft across the late 19th and 20th centuries, Bardach’s rhetoric is indicative of a wider redeployment of craft lexicons in the service of informational-corporatism.
Such appeals to workerist language have long been standard within right-wing politics, and western media have for centuries peddled romantic notions of craft labor as part of a fundamentally hegemonic culture industry. There is dark irony, though, in the fact that as the American university redistributes economic resources toward professional-managerial workers it turns back to forms of labor which higher education has itself helped to eradicate. As Findeisen reminds us, “our culture’s most compelling forms of resistance to the business of higher education are not resistance at all but rather the system’s symbolic core.” Postwar writers themselves evince profound regret for the evanescence of manual labor, juxtaposing an evolving knowledge economy with a lapsed era of craftsmanship. “We sigh—or I do—for the days when whole cultures were infused with noble simplicity,” poet Denise Levertov wrote in 1961. When “there was no ugliness; … when from shepherd’s pipe and warrior’s sandal to palace door and bard’s song, all was well made.” Part of her own craft essay “On the Work of the Imagination,” Levertov’s lament offers a powerful reminder of the well-wroughtedness to which workshop writing has aspired, a potent ideal even as it becomes effaced by, or tactically redeployed within, the American university.
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If Levertov objects to the degraded craftsmanship of modern life, contemporary writers have objected with equal dismay, as I’ve suggested, to the effects of institutionalized craft on creative expression, particularly the expression of writers of color. “We got the craft thing at Iowa,” Sandra Cisneros explains, “but we didn’t learn about the why, why we write what we write, or for whom. … I mean, all the things about craft are important, but they’re secondary to who we write for and why.” More recently, Junot Diaz has revealed that he “didn’t have a great workshop experience” at Cornell, citing “the standard problem of MFA programs. That shit was too white.” In his widely cited polemic “MFA vs. POC,” Diaz explains that “in my workshop we never talked about race except on the rare occasion when someone wanted to argue that ‘race discussions’ were exactly the discussion a serious writer should not be having.” Poet Eduardo C. Corral echoes Diaz in describing his own experience at Iowa. “The Iowa Writers’ Workshop nearly broke me,” Corral stated in 2017. “My talent was dismissed. My doubts were amplified.” Though MFA programs have long enjoined their students to “find your voice,” it seems that what they have meant is “let us provide you your voice”—or, potentially more deleterious, “let us provide you ours.” In tracking the hidden history of the creative writing workshop, it turns out, we have uncovered not merely the incorporation of craft lexicons into an overarching professional-managerialism, but the foundation of a particular manner of literary whiteness.
In addition, however, to delimiting the expression of student-writers and homogenizing much of American poetry, craft-based pedagogies have worked quite materially to consolidate the authority of elite educational institutions.
Of course, objections like those levied by Cisneros, Diaz, and Corral are themselves carefully crafted pieces of rhetoric. Downplaying the influence of professionally enabling institutions like Iowa and Cornell, they portray the literary artist as a resilient “talent” whose deserved success comes despite, not because of, his or her participation in bureaucratic systems of literary licensure. Tracing this kind of disavowal to the Romantic privileging of individual expression, Frances Ferguson describes a “series of self-delusions that involved a mystification of making, as if by calling oneself a genius one could achieve a blissful schizophrenia in which one could imagine that one’s own production was one’s own accident.” For Pierre Bourdieu, a similar disavowal exists within contemporary cultural production. “Producers tend, as we have seen, to think of themselves as intellectuals or artists by divine right,” Bourdieu contends,
as “creators,” that is as auctors “claiming authority by virtue of their charisma” and attempting to impose an auctoritas that recognizes no other principle of legitimation than itself. … They cannot but resist, moreover, the institutional authority which the educational system, as a consecratory institution, opposes to their competing claims.
For Bourdieu, these writers yearn secretly for the official accreditation which they otherwise publicly reject. Ironically, in their reliance on a stereotype of the expressive artist hampered by disciplinary constraints, such writers activate a craft ideal which testifies unwittingly to the ideological power of the very institutions they disavow.
Situating these rhetorical gestures within an institutional and cultural history of the workshop, however, allows us to envision with renewed clarity how the discipline of creative writing has come to subordinate individuals to those institutions that administer contemporary life. The “workshop,” so called, is one such institution, but to name it—to fix it in time and place, as if it were an isolable phenomenon—is to imagine that we could ever exist outside of those institutions, to imagine that we are not, even now, the real class they are crafting.
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Despite its considerable shortcomings, creative writing craft remains for me, as it did when I was a student, a meaningful and persuasive pedagogy, one especially useful in demystifying practices that can sometimes frustrate young writers.
If craft-based pedagogies limit individual expression, they also provide enabling language for those students who might never have imagined themselves as writers in the first place. In this way, the democratization of literary culture, including through the workshop, may be no more lamentable than any of the other powerful democratic movements through which we are currently living. As the politics of the last decade have impressed upon us, moreover, few skills are more crucial to the maintenance of democracy than linguistic facility, the kind of close attention to language use which empowers one, for example, to distinguish between real and fake news sources. And writing workshops foster creative work which in many cases speaks powerfully against those very inequalities the university engenders, including economic stratification.
It may be that this ambivalence—my continued persuasion toward and promotion of an institutional practice I recognize as flawed—constitutes a more or less significant ethical lapse. It may be that my relation to craft aligns me ideologically with Stephen Schryer’s “new-class fantasist,” that academic intellectual who “ignor[es] or mystif[ies] the ‘sphere of strategy’ within which they work—the institutions of the post-New Deal state.” For Schryer, such workers “la[y] claim to superior moral probity and technical expertise,” transcending in their own imaginations “the purely pecuniary motives of the traditional bourgeoisie”—it may be, Schryer suggests, that I teach for the paycheck and call it democracy.
Far from abandoning craft lexicons, though, contemporary workshops might adapt craft to meet distinctly social ends. Integrated alongside broader questions of form, history, and theory, craft pedagogies become a means of exploring more fully how we experience and alter our lives through language, a kind of “applied poetics” as invested in individual expression, I would think, as in social and historical forms. When I teach poetic lineation, I ask students to read Charles Olson’s 1950 “Projective Verse” alongside contemporary poetry from Patricia Smith and David Tomas Martinez, exploring the origins of lineation in breath and the human body. When I teach structure, we examine how the New Critical preference for irony and ambiguity—Cleanth Brooks’s “well-wrought” poem—relates to more didactic or politically explicit traditions from the 1930s, 1960s, and today. This more socially conscious approach to craft extends to classroom practices. Though based on the traditional silent-author model, my workshops give space for writers themselves to shape discussion of their work, creating a dialogue in which writers and respondents learn collaboratively from one another’s expertise. We read all poems, moreover, privileging what the text itself wants to be. And, at least at the University of Illinois, we strive to admit students diverse not only in terms of identity but in terms of aesthetics, from those who write in radical forms about queer trauma to those writing brilliantly about modernist architecture in 1950s Los Angeles.
In tracking the hidden history of the creative writing workshop, it turns out, we have uncovered not merely the incorporation of craft lexicons into an overarching professional-managerialism, but the foundation of a particular manner of literary whiteness.
At the heart of this work is the conviction that attending to language at the level of line and syntax—or in terms of shape and structure, or plot and trajectory—can open students to more ethical and artful language use across their lives. When we understand poetic rhythm as the movement of a column of air inside of us, we understand something too about the rhythms of our bodies and the revolutions of nations and planets. When we break language into craft techniques, we grasp more fully how systems of injustice perpetuate themselves through rhetorical coercions and linguistic snares. “As it happens,” Joan Didion writes in “Slouching Towards Bethlehem,” “I am still committed to the idea that the ability to think for one’s self depends upon one’s mastery of the language”—craft pedagogies facilitate that mastery as much as they imperil it.
The craft-based workshop is hardly a monolithic institution. Nor should we understand craft as restrictive decree, a disciplinary pedagogy designed to shape cohort after cohort in the image of the workshop. Rather, craft might designate, as I hope it does in my own classes, an array of cultural strategies, skills, and solutions, a toolkit of possibilities that student-writers carry with them in their creative labor.
Christopher Kempf is the author of the poetry collections Late in the Empire of Men and What though the Field Be Lost, as well as of the scholarly book Craft Class: The Writing Workshop in American Culture. Recipient of a Pushcart Prize, a National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship, and a Wallace Stegner Fellowship from Stanford University, he teaches in the MFA program at the University of Illinois.